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Yeah there is no romance and it’s male lead

Are you asking if the main character will have a Harem?

The author did well at setting the scene and describing what goes on. I also like the relationship between Theaus and Shura. You did a good job of characterizing their bond. But there are improvements to be made in terms of dialogue exchanges.

The character of drey is very interesting to me. His thoughts and actions show that there is a lot more to him and I will continue to read this novel. The way the author describes the world is superb and very immersive.

I like how you made use of sound effects it make m feel more Immersed in th action going on in the storye

Please make sure to leave a comment and review on my novel, and if you can leave a vote. I would greatly appreciate it.

Thanks I’ve been putting a lot of work into it.

Yeah we gotta get in a call one day.

Yo Ekiram, did you make this new cover art yourself?

Thank you