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2023-06-03 15:53

This book is average at best. The pros : - The translation is ok - The characters are interesting - The interactions are entertaining The pros : - The chapters are too short. Each chapter is so short that it feels like nothing substential happens in the story. - The story is too long. Seriously? 1100 + chapters and the book is still ongoing? A slice of life with over 100 chapters is - most of the time - boring in the long run. And it's the case here. So many unnecessary events( confrontations with the neighbours and other people) stretch the story . Plus, it becomes quickly repetitive. - The antagonists. They are too stupid. It's like aside from the Mc's family( counting the Ml as part of the family too), everyone is stupid. This isn’t entertaining at all, as they serve to make the Mc glow up. The ml is also a problem. He is ypur usual ice block. And even by 100~ chapters, we don't know about his motivations for marrying the Mc , and he seems to not have any personality aside from being cold and domeenering. - The pace is slow. As i said , by 100+ chapters , the story is still in it's early stages and this just feels like things are evolving at a snail's speed. All in all , this is your average chinese novel about reincarnation in the 19s. This book doesn't deserves that we spend coins on it.

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Even the thing about Transmigration can be removed and nothing essential would be lost.

Thefantastictouch
ThefantastictouchLv4

Correction : It’s "100+ chapters and still ongoing ." And for anoyone who cares to know , the original version ( in chinese) has ended up with 1375 chapters. And that's what i was referring to when saying that a slice of life shouldn’t be that long.

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