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Jetboy76
Jetboy76Lv152yr
2023-03-22 13:29

This novel is amazing the MC is so funny and dark! I hope the author keeps the updates coming!

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Sakata_Gintoki1010
Sakata_Gintoki1010Lv14

I'm not good at English especially Grammar First, I like your Idea to have 5 protagonist and an overpowered MC with fame ( I'm a fan of strong to stronger mc) but I'm not gonna lie nor sugarcoat my words rn since I was quite frustrated at this novel, YOU RUIN IT yeah Let's Start with Protagonist, I like the Protagonist at start but when you make him do a plagiarism business and neglect his training you know what's worse you made him hide his identity as businessman I mean what's the point of that? just for face slapping at the future?And he still had no personality or whatsoever AND Last One this is the most frustrating part for me, you make the progress of the MC too slow hays Next the characters, I'm Ok with Protagonists since only two were properly introduced so far well the Hero is your typical character that you want to kill I read many novels with that kind of type so I'm ok with him the complain I have is to that regressor, you know what's my impression to him? I thought he's an opportunist but yeah no he's like a Young Master You Introduced too much character at the start, which frustrate me a lot since I'm not good at remembering name, Well let's start now with World Background and the Plot, There's little to no impormation about the World, so Minus points for me and about the Plot, my opinion to this is it's too predictable and Cliche yeah that's it Well I'll end this now since I was calmed down now P.S. I was Disappointed at your Novel but It really had a potential so I was thinking of sticking to this novel for a while before I completely dropped it, btw Don't be Discouraged at this, Good luck 🤞🍀

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