Has major potential with little to no grammatical errors, clear explanations, and an interesting plot. Can’t wait to read more in the future!

author make protagonist like General who face his own problems like a warrior and don't make him one who brings light through dark or protect his sister like idiot and make not afraid of anything even his has to take his sister life if needed for like cold,intelligent , villain

I'm not good at English especially Grammar First, I like your Idea to have 5 protagonist and an overpowered MC with fame ( I'm a fan of strong to stronger mc) but I'm not gonna lie nor sugarcoat my words rn since I was quite frustrated at this novel, YOU RUIN IT yeah Let's Start with Protagonist, I like the Protagonist at start but when you make him do a plagiarism business and neglect his training you know what's worse you made him hide his identity as businessman I mean what's the point of that? just for face slapping at the future?And he still had no personality or whatsoever AND Last One this is the most frustrating part for me, you make the progress of the MC too slow hays Next the characters, I'm Ok with Protagonists since only two were properly introduced so far well the Hero is your typical character that you want to kill I read many novels with that kind of type so I'm ok with him the complain I have is to that regressor, you know what's my impression to him? I thought he's an opportunist but yeah no he's like a Young Master You Introduced too much character at the start, which frustrate me a lot since I'm not good at remembering name, Well let's start now with World Background and the Plot, There's little to no impormation about the World, so Minus points for me and about the Plot, my opinion to this is it's too predictable and Cliche yeah that's it Well I'll end this now since I was calmed down now P.S. I was Disappointed at your Novel but It really had a potential so I was thinking of sticking to this novel for a while before I completely dropped it, btw Don't be Discouraged at this, Good luck 🤞🍀

I think the novel is pretty good. Dear author I think you need to just focus on some world building more so we can understand the power and hierarchy of the world more but as to say a great start. Has potential to be very good. I hope my comment helps. Try the novel once and then judge. [img=recommend]

I like the setting like how the mc as antagonist is op but again it is irritating when the plot of hiding power comes. I would rather want a novel where the mc is villain but op and doesn't hide his power and shows is superiority and cold blooded but is super cool and handsome with novel mood setting should be like dangerous vibe type yet the it will have the mood like in this novel light perfect balance. Unfortunately the mood setting is good in this novel and so is op mc but his character is not expressed or described that of cool villain. Can anyone please recommend me a novel which satisfies my all the criterias listed above please. Atleast please someone recommend op villainous mc type novel

very good, sad it got dropped. maybe un drop it since this novel ha gotten a lot of support. Keep it up sir!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this novel gives me a headache so I'm dropping it my opinion I mean no harm

This novel is amazing the MC is so funny and dark! I hope the author keeps the updates coming!