Review Detail of OtakuGamerGirlTA in The Last Heiress Uncharted

I think this story is preparing to be quite an interesting one, and while I've only read six chapters so far, I can say I like it. The world, characters and plot are all well developed and thoughful. I really like Aliyah, who seems to be a strong protagonist and I love her no nonsense personality. The only things that could be improved is certain sections where the dialogue between two characters is mashed together in one paragraph, instead of in their own lines. Overall though, the author has done a great job!