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I'm a girl with a passion for writing, especially romance. I love romance between women, but also write romance across all genres. My GL novel, The Vampire's Priestess, is here on WN. Please enjoy it!
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Hi everyone, author here. Thank you for checking out my story! I hope you will enjoy joining Trinity on her journey, as she ventures deep into the nine circles of hell and encounters various enemies and dangers. This will be a dark fantasy story about vengeance, self-discovery, and trying to find what's right in a world of many wrongs. Trinity will meet a multitude of women along the way, and they will become her strongest allies in battle, as well as her precious lovers off the battlefield. ;) If you like my story, please vote and leave a quick review! They help motivate me and make me happy too. Thank you and please enjoy! =)
A world without men. That's the premise of this story, yet for such a simple statement, it's anything but. In just a few chapters, we are encouraged to ponder, is such a world truly desirable? Can it work? Will things really change? Or will the rejected 'evil' simply take new form? I am honestly eager to find out and I must praise the author for posing such an implicit question to us readers in a smooth and cohesive way. I found every chapter to be very well written and great at pulling me in. I quickly became invested in our lead Thando and her experience thus far. I'm eager to see how the relationship between her and her friends develop. Most of all, I want to see where this journey will take her next.
I'm sorry, I'm just replying now. Unfortunately, I don't get comment notifications as this book account was created for me as part of my contract, so I have no direct access. But this is my personal user account, and so I just want to say thank you for reading my story and for your support! I hope you'll continue to enjoy it!đ
This story is really interesting in plot, but I think what I love most is definitely the characterizations! I think the leads are so easy to like and relate to and their personalities shine through. Which means that the author did an excellent job at writing them so well. Great job! Minor grammar issues, but nothing too extreme. This story deserves to be seen!
Really interesting so far! I've read the first 5 chapters, and the author has been able to build a fascinating world in that short amount of time. The main character seems very cool as well. I also loved what the author did to define the alien language. Very creative! I think if the author updated more frequently, they'd have a hit for sure. Keep it up author!
I think this story is preparing to be quite an interesting one, and while I've only read six chapters so far, I can say I like it. The world, characters and plot are all well developed and thoughful. I really like Aliyah, who seems to be a strong protagonist and I love her no nonsense personality. The only things that could be improved is certain sections where the dialogue between two characters is mashed together in one paragraph, instead of in their own lines. Overall though, the author has done a great job!
I hope she won't come to regret that.