Ok so let me put it this way. Cover - Awesome, the author even made it themselves. Title - Captivating Synopsis - it pulls you right in. The plot seems really interesting and the little poem is just a work of art! The execution of the story isn't lacking in any way and I really like the way the characters are described. I guess the only thing I didn't like was that the chapters were really long. But that's just due to personal preferences so its not a big deal. The story is otherwise just amazing. There are a few grammatical errors here and there but I think a little bit of editing abd proofreading can fix that. Best of luck author!
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LIKEGlad you like the cover and thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it 😊 Yeah I do get that a lot abt my long chapters. It's a weakness of mine ~ which I am trying to improve in future stories but for this one it's too late since it's completed. Even after editing it's still long. Haha
There's no need to reduce the length of the content. What I meant was that you could split the chapter into two or three parts and then just put part 1 part 2 part 3 and the like. That way you don't need to comprise on quality while the readers will find the interface easier to use. Regular chapter length is usually around 1500 words to 2000 words.
Sereinchoo:Glad you like the cover and thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it 😊 Yeah I do get that a lot abt my long chapters. It's a weakness of mine ~ which I am trying to improve in future stories but for this one it's too late since it's completed. Even after editing it's still long. Haha
Cz actually the total chapter might go over 100 if I further split it into part1 part 2 etc as suggested... Which I m worried that it might deter readers too. This is one of the dilemma >..<
ThePotatoKing:There's no need to reduce the length of the content. What I meant was that you could split the chapter into two or three parts and then just put part 1 part 2 part 3 and the like. That way you don't need to comprise on quality while the readers will find the interface easier to use. Regular chapter length is usually around 1500 words to 2000 words.