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2023-01-17 19:04

Comment as episode 50. Worth reading. There are some beautiful places but some places are very arrogant. There are very silly fighting parts, especially in that part, it is very shallow to make nonsense review. Also, the dialogue is very wrong, sometimes there is an ambiguous place between the two conversations, it is not clear whether person A or person B is speaking. chapters are also slow. a novel with potential I hope its potential is shown

Lust System in the Murim World

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