I've been working on this for a while now, and finally felt it worthy to enter the fantasy carnival! This will be a kingdom-building adventure with some action-packed scenes. Slimes evolving to destroy entire human armies alone and the like. I can't wait to see you all in my comments section! [img=recommend]

A fantasy novel worth reading. It was fun to read, fresh for my taste, and enjoyable. The Main Character is good. The World Building is a perfect fit for the story. The pacing is fine, neither rushed nor delayed, just smooth enough to make me read more chapters. I recommend this to all readers out there.

I've decided to not rewrite the story. Put simply, I want to focus on better things and produce higher-quality work in the future. If I rewrote it, I'd have no comparison, I'd never see my improvement. This isn't my best work, but... since people have fun reading it, why give up on it? I will use the basis that I created while I was sick to turn this story into something truly wonderful. Thank you for reading, I know you won't regret it.

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I had to give a 4.8 because the only characters we really interact with are the slip slime and Alaric. I hope that you'll introduce more characters soon. This book is really high quality please keep updating!

I've only read 3 chapters, but that's all I needed to read for me to see that this is not for me cons: 1. author tells characters personalities but doesn't show them, saying what a character is like through narration is the worst introduction to characters ever, author literally skips over a friendship building carriage ride and calls them friends through narration.... 2. mc is a reincarnated individual and the only reason author chose that is because intelligence means you'll have a stronger power or something along those lines, it just feels like useless knowledge 3. mc is bland as all get out so far, I haven't seen any personality 4. dialogue is kinda not good, right when getting his powers people are like "wow lordship powers are strong even with the weakest monster" and immediately retcons that and start trashing slimes, even further if slimes were found to be trash, why was mc so confident in making slimes super strong, why does he believe slimes could amount to anything at all, kinda stupid 5. haven't felt any sort of world building besides "this is forger village", that's it PRO'S: 1.good grammar, haven't found any errors in his writing itself which is phenomenal

great story, but it reels like a part time gig where they are only posting whenever they remember to and leave you waiting for WEEKS to find out whats next

I went into this novel with low hopes as this is a fairly common genre. I was presently surprised by the quality of the story and the attention to details. Have I seen better YES, but it was worth continuing for a while. The fight scenes are ok and the town development aspect of it as well as the handling of mundane issues are well done. The protagonist's internal monologue is believable and realistic as it is some disordered. Here is where things go south, spoilers ahead: The slimes themselves are overpowered, given the context of the world it is really unclear why. The power system is interesting as well as the formation stuff, but too much too quickly the author does not really give us a chance to get used to a new aspect of the world or new plot thread before jumping to the next. The protagonist's personality goes through the common shift from "I will be the best through hard work" to "I must act above others and look for trouble for the sake of plot". A severe lack of other perspectives for a novel with so many characters and a really out of place time skip are problems as well. To the author, this is good, but it could be much better. I still applaud your effort and dedication to this and hope you can write a story that you will enjoy

1st few chapters i wanted to read it more cuz felt good concept But very soon it just became almost brain pain for me comes back everyone dead, buying seeds, enemy weak asf still making it as if big deal Too rushed and out of place chat lines like that did i just call them dolts one -_-. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]