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8358038Lv12yr
2022-12-04 04:04

pour le premier livre j'adore et j'aime le fait qu'il aille beaucoup de détail mais je n'ai pas mis 5 étoile car je trouvait que le début en avait un peut trop mais sinon ses très bon comme livre je le recommende

Tower Of Sin

OnlySupremeOne
4.7
9 Chs

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OnlySupremeOne
OnlySupremeOneAuthor

Thanks for the review. It's alright even if you give 1 star or 2 stars,as long as you give your honest opinion that's fine. First chapter was too much yes,but i couldn't find anything to write since that was my first novel. Thanks for being honest and saying mistakes of this book.

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Moonlight_senora
Moonlight_senoraLv11

My fetish for transmigration books makes me like the novel and my recent love for boos involving system...🥺🥺 Book gats potential and me can't wait to see it go places💃No errors or anything, cool book😛

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QueenFrieza
QueenFriezaLv15

Overall this is a wonderful start! If you're considering giving it a read, please do! I'm impressed by the details with each new chapter. The world the author is setting up is definitely going to grow into something amazing. My only critique is possibly breaking up some of the longer paragraphs. On an online reading platform, it tends to make the info easier to digest in smaller chunks. There are also some errors with past vs present tense not being consistent. The small issues are very fixable and the book is shaping up to be so much fun. Excited to see what's next for this one

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Galanar
GalanarLv15

Seems like I'll be your harshest review yet. Good. The writing quality could be better, due to small mistakes here and there, like redundancy and verb tenses, but there are no glaring typos or the such, so 4 stars anyway. The update stability is good. 5 stars Story development, to me, is lacking. Nothing happens really in 6 chapters, albeit the very funny humor. 2 stars. The character design is good. You clearly represent your character as a gym bro and make him funny in his inner musings and interactions with monsters. 5 stars. World background is still lacking. We don't know much about his original world nor the tower, for now. 3 stars

2yr
VertiKalEl
VertiKalElLv4

Tower of God, Second Life Ranker, I'm the only one loved by the constellation. although I never read the novels, only manga. sure this is what their novels would look like and I LOVE it! Added.

2yr
Georg_Spaner
Georg_SpanerLv2

I really like these kind's of novels, they remind of the big korean ones, like Solo Leveling or the hole Tower Ascension Genre. The author is new, so I am very excited to see where this story goes. persistence is everything, I do not mind small mistakes as long as the author keeps up with the good work.

2yr
_Faizy_
_Faizy_Lv1

Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰

2yr
RiverGoat
RiverGoatLv1

Promising story, it has a great first chap and no grammar mistakes, the story hooks you at the very first lines. I really like the humor, the academy thing really hit my weak point.

2yr
Kirito_K5
Kirito_K5Lv13

Pretty cool, the mc isn't hard to follow and the story talks on demon and monsters.

2yr
XcrapttS
XcrapttSLv4

This Mc was quite entertaining, I liked it sorry if am not giving enough details in this review haha

2yr
BanishedMortal
BanishedMortalLv1

Great start to the story, hooked me right in. Loved the gym-related humor, could relate to it.

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