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Galanar
GalanarLv152yr
2022-12-06 20:40

Seems like I'll be your harshest review yet. Good. The writing quality could be better, due to small mistakes here and there, like redundancy and verb tenses, but there are no glaring typos or the such, so 4 stars anyway. The update stability is good. 5 stars Story development, to me, is lacking. Nothing happens really in 6 chapters, albeit the very funny humor. 2 stars. The character design is good. You clearly represent your character as a gym bro and make him funny in his inner musings and interactions with monsters. 5 stars. World background is still lacking. We don't know much about his original world nor the tower, for now. 3 stars

Tower Of Sin

OnlySupremeOne
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OnlySupremeOne
OnlySupremeOneAuthor

I thank you senior for this honest review. Yes World background and story development is too lacking. I will try to improve them to my best of ability. I will also try to improve my writing quality too. Thank you again senior!

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