Hmmm. I'll leave the 'stability of updates,' 'story development,' and 'character design empty for now. Well since the story has a good potential, I bet it won't disappoint in the future. I have to say the writing quality is clean. 5/5 World Background. I'll give it a 5/5 since the world building sounds mysterious and gigantic. After all, it was depicting a world with a plot similar to the Book of Revelation especially with the potential antagonist so called beast of revelation because it depicts numerous nations that will cause famine and destruction. I'll come back to edit my score & message for this novel, once it updates more. Anyways don't give up, this novel has promising potential. I was just browsing through, 'The Legendary Mechanic,' and I never thought I'd see this newly updated novel. Hehehe. But it was kind of disappointing that I read it too early.
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