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Abyss_Stigma2mthCommentedCh 11 Final Stage – An Evil Demon's Wish- Abyss_Stigma2mthCommented
Sadge...
…but what was reflected in my eyes weren't the usual rough, worn-out hands of a failed adult man nearing his thirties… but a smooth, unblemished hand with a soft, milky textured skin… - Abyss_Stigma2mthCommented
For a being that brings misfortune. His luck is actually at 1? Surprising, not as worse as that specific manhwa character I read., ahem.
>> LUK: 1 (Fixed) - Abyss_Stigma2mthCommented
HAHAHAHA. It's just threatening him at this point.
>> Rewards: Your Life, Access to the Game System! - Abyss_Stigma2mthCommented
Kidnappers wouldn't care even if you complain kiddo.
[Just shut up and open your status screen, damn it!] - Abyss_Stigma2mthCommented
Bro finally touched some grass after years of staying inside his dark room.
I only felt a slight breeze on my skin before my feet finally touched some grass… - Abyss_Stigma2mthCommented
Indeed, one of my kind.
I was a virgin to this day, not because I couldn't get girls, but because I wanted to become a true wizard when I grew older! - Abyss_Stigma2mthCommented
His one of my kind. But not as good as me. Close.
Heavy dark circles could be seen under his lifeless pair of eyes that were glued to the monitor screen propped up on the table in front of him. - Abyss_Stigma6mthPosted
I am surprised that your writing person perspective seemed to have changed from the previous work in your Fanfiction of Honkai Impact: Apocalypse. It's a bit disoriented, but it can work well if you get more experience as time goes on since you're still trying out a new person perspective implementing 1st and 3rd perspective (by distinguishing MC to be the first perspective while the others to be 3rd perspective), seeing as how the fight scenes are improving in every chapter. But, perhaps it'll take time. The plot of the story seems kind of interesting especially the Demon King's past. I think you should make your own original novel or something. But, yeah. I didn't really liked Soul Land that much due to it's drama and repetitive story verse with shounen MC faceslapping everyone. But, I hope you can recontinue Honkai Impact 3rd once your done. I like your work, ganbatte!
- Abyss_Stigma6mthCommented"Stand proud, you are strong."
- Abyss_Stigma6mthCommentedI then slammed a heavy jab towards Xu Sanshi's chin with him facing blankly towards the sky. His eyes were about to fall unconscious, but he gritted his teeth and remained still, as he breathed, and defended his vitals with a somewhat calmer look now.
- Abyss_Stigma6mthCommented"Teach me a lesson? Was that all talk? A weakling's pride is pointless if they don't have the strength to back it up."
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- Abyss_Stigma1yrPosted
Hmmm. I'll leave the 'stability of updates,' 'story development,' and 'character design empty for now. Well since the story has a good potential, I bet it won't disappoint in the future. I have to say the writing quality is clean. 5/5 World Background. I'll give it a 5/5 since the world building sounds mysterious and gigantic. After all, it was depicting a world with a plot similar to the Book of Revelation especially with the potential antagonist so called beast of revelation because it depicts numerous nations that will cause famine and destruction. I'll come back to edit my score & message for this novel, once it updates more. Anyways don't give up, this novel has promising potential. I was just browsing through, 'The Legendary Mechanic,' and I never thought I'd see this newly updated novel. Hehehe. But it was kind of disappointing that I read it too early.
- Abyss_Stigma1yrCommented
The Book of Revelation and the tree of death, Qliphoth? The plot sounds like a religious end of the world scenario to me, lol. They'll have to fight a the four beast of apocalypses.
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Welcome to Raccoon City, everybody! This is a place where crazy things such as human experimentations are common! After all, the more infected the more accurate the data is!
The Elk City Epidemic Outbreak.