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Honestly, from what I read, it was terrible. The author comes off to me as grinding for money more than creating an interesting world. The character started off as a character I would've loved to learn about and then reincarnated into a 2d boring cat, and that's saying something because I love cats. The author practices a thorough writing style of tell not show so I often feel quite bored reading as i don't get much to paint the world in my mind and little interaction between the world and his actions cause me to care little about what he does. for a kitten who has incredibly overpowered stats he seems to be surrounded by an incredible tough environment since he rarely accidently breaks things with his newfound strength despite never training to control it. His interactions with system should be funny when it repeatable calls it dumb and yet it only serves to bore me further because a page full of caps lock follows that seems more like a middleschoolers playful tangent then a real interaction between two characters. To top it off the grammar is so horrendous that I question whether I actually want to continue reading after every single paragraph. This wouldn't be such a problem if the author struggled with English or something but there is literally a free app which they could download that would make there book 100 times more grammatically correct. TLDR: Good start turned bad story, Shallow characters, tell not show writing style, horrendous grammar, deceitful and greedy author