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Caleb_Potter

Caleb_Potter

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2021-01-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
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    Honestly, from what I read, it was terrible. The author comes off to me as grinding for money more than creating an interesting world. The character started off as a character I would've loved to learn about and then reincarnated into a 2d boring cat, and that's saying something because I love cats. The author practices a thorough writing style of tell not show so I often feel quite bored reading as i don't get much to paint the world in my mind and little interaction between the world and his actions cause me to care little about what he does. for a kitten who has incredibly overpowered stats he seems to be surrounded by an incredible tough environment since he rarely accidently breaks things with his newfound strength despite never training to control it. His interactions with system should be funny when it repeatable calls it dumb and yet it only serves to bore me further because a page full of caps lock follows that seems more like a middleschoolers playful tangent then a real interaction between two characters. To top it off the grammar is so horrendous that I question whether I actually want to continue reading after every single paragraph. This wouldn't be such a problem if the author struggled with English or something but there is literally a free app which they could download that would make there book 100 times more grammatically correct. TLDR: Good start turned bad story, Shallow characters, tell not show writing style, horrendous grammar, deceitful and greedy author

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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    grammar! at this point the thing is so hard to read I've considered dropping your book almost every other paragraph. The first life of the character was interesting. There seemed to be some actual life in the characters you introduced but now it's boiled down to a cat sitting in a cave doing nothing and the system making fun of him for it. Describe what happens in more detail. Rather than just saying he used water spells to escape the pool describe what the spell looks and feels like. If his spellcasting is truly incredible maybe the spell will make his fur stand on end and the "random slime" tremble. The book started as a great concept but come on, as it is you've made it unreadable.

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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Replied to VoidAutarch

    True and yet it's no less infuriating to read or see someone do it

    "Anyways, since you've eventually figured out the trick despite losing over a couple hundred times, you've shown me that you're more than worthy of inheriting my legacy. Not only have you shown me that you have the tenacity, you also have the quick wits needed for it." Saying these words, a screen appeared in front of Jekyll, with him interacting with it as a string of notifications soon appeared in front of Valyr.
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    MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
    Games · TrueDawn
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    after reading that the guy would cheat in the quest description why did he try to play fair? My man has definetly been relying on too many game guides

    Naturally, Jekyll noticed this subtle change, making him inwardly let out a sigh of relief. 'Took you long enough to figure it out.'
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    MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
    Games · TrueDawn
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Replied to Hyzouille_Gr

    there is likely a limit in mind for these kind of things. I would imagine it relates to your level compared to theirs on how much you can damage their levels with quests. Also if my memory serves right all quests thus far have been optional and only once accepted will drop your level on failing it. in addition to that if the king or npc truly outclassed the target could they not just as easily cripll, maim, or kill them? you might keep your base stats but a two handed swordsman would be significantly weaker if they lost an arm. A bard would lose all their power if their vocal cords got fried, etc.

    Quest Penalty: Affinity -100 with Jekyll, Level -3
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    MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
    Games · TrueDawn
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Replied to nvanattia

    despite how weird it may sound me and plenty of other people do it quite naturally in conversation. though most of the time I only do it for comedic effect, some actually do it that way.

    "As long as you don't mind the mess on the other side, you're free to come in." Vera wryly chuckled, scratching her head.
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    MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith
    Games · TrueDawn
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    lol

    Jongho Lee, Hanho's father, argued that it was all thanks to his experience with the Go-Stop games that he could draw the "Pioneer" card in a timely manner. He added that it was his worst mistake in his life that he didn't teach his son how to play Go-Stop games early on.
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    what's the point in finding money equivalents to hold? it's not like he can use it for anything other then the lottery shops

    "Right. The gold I get by hunting an orc is 80 won, but a goblin is worth only 10 won. So far, I've focused on goblins, but I think there must be a bunch of guys with bigger bonuses somewhere."
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    so... it weighed as much as he guessed? he thought it was quite heavy so I must be that then

    When he lifted the item, it didn't weigh more than he thought, perhaps because of its good balance. He didn't know what the material was. Obviously, this was far from normal.
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    ah yes, great victories are indeed great...

    "I understand why the great victories in the history of the Korean people are great. That reminder hits the nail on the head..."
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    does my fate change based on my actions? yes, yes it does

    'What does it mean by 'my fate changed subtly?' Does my disposition change depending on my actions?'
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    alright I'm betting this new villain either loses popularity and strokes back or is suddenly eliminated by weak monsters

    Basically Jinsok was an old fossil who insisted on hierarchy. He was also notorious for hitting on girls in the department. Since he was very covetous of a title, he joined the student council.
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    so are they both pretending to know each other? I'm imagining them throwing arms over each other's shoulders and awkwardly laughing while they try to piece together a "backstory" of their friendship

    Sungwoo also recognized him. He was Jinsok Lee, and he was two years ahead of him in the same department.
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Replied to Jokuns

    I believe he is supposed to still have low mana so maybe he can't. That doesn't explain why he didn't even consider it though

    Ch 5 Campus that turned into a hell (5)
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    so does that mean that other authors books are now a part of this world's modern world then? because that can't be a coincidence

    "I have a name for you. Your name will be Kaladin!"
    altalt
    The Black Necromancer
    Fantasy · Nilo_A
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    as if he could refuse it

    His <Spirit Summoning> skill had managed to gain two levels out of that stint, which was a gain that Leon would not refuse.
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    The Black Necromancer
    Fantasy · Nilo_A
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    what was the definition of omniscient again?

    Melinda's eyes widened, she hadn't even recognized that the old man was one of the Wisemen, not to mention, Elton Dunne, he was the Wiseman famed for his in-depth research of the Apparatus and ways of the dungeons and labyrinths. His books were widespread across the continent earning him the title 'The All-knowing'.
    altalt
    A Cold-Blooded POV
    Fantasy · Month
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  • Caleb_Potter
    Caleb_Potter1yr
    Commented

    good thing it only took almost dying a couple times for him to realize the obvious

    'Would I still be living in peace, slowly hunting and growing stronger if I just could control my temper?' he finally found another reason why the dragons died out, 'We dragons are too rageful, easily going on a rampage, creating lots of enemies in the process.'
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    Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game
    Fantasy · AnonymUser
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