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2023-08-20 20:38

The concept of the book sounds interesting, but unfortunately both the story and translation are inconsistent and full of plot holes. There are so many random mentions and details that just don't make sense... Dropped this after only 13chapters. No patience to deal with this kind of bad writing

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