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2024-08-15 15:47

I really enjoyed this story and after finishing IT I still want more.

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Shirimasen
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I don't normally write reviews, but I just can't help it with this book. the characters are just *chef kiss* everyone has a charming and distinct personality, each with their own unique characteristics that make them stand out. their introductions are not too urgent, the writer gives you enough time to process new information without it being too boring or slow. on the topic of writing, can I just point out that the way delana writes emotions is pretty much godly?. emotions are not the only thing that makes her unique either. the scenery, the way she sets the atmosphere, simple words like "beautiful" and the usual description of "deep eyes", she has a way of somehow making them....how do I say it? meaningful? yeah, that's the word. it's not just a way to describe someone's appearance, it's the mc's pov of how he sees ml. it's how he can't help but fall to the other, it's how he always finds himself in a daze everytime ml talks to him. it's how precious he finds ml's smile. it's about how much he loves him. everyday life moments, and interactions are very enjoyable. simple pats on the head, and flicks on the forehead are enough to warm my heart. call me simple, but mystery is not something I enjoy. nor do I like detective work or police shenanigans. I rather things being straightforward since I hate complicated situations. I was actually hesitant to read this because of that. but delana somehow made me like it--? I don't know why. maybe it's because mystery is not the "only" focus. and the fact that she made me like the mc enough to care about his past. the world building is not really unique, it's the usual modren omegaverse. what makes me happy though is the fact that it's not mentioned every singlr second. it actually feels real, unlike the many hrny ah novels I've read (they're good too but still--) in short. it's like the perfect mix between real life and omgaverse. now for character design... sheeeeesh--- how can literally everyone be so hot? especially Mc. long hair? check.✔️ muscles? check.✔️ scars? check.✔️ teacher? check.✔️ lovable but also hot? CHECK✔️✔️. WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR🛐💕💀?! anyway. I guess you can tell I got tired halfway through writing this shizzy review. so I'm gonna take my leave. peace out *fades out of existence*.

roasty_Marshmallow
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Can I just say one thing😤 This book IS TOO DIE FOR🤩 Everything about it, the plot, the development, the characters every thing is done so perfectly! I love this book and it’s officially taken a place inside my heart forever. If your unsure if you want to start reading this book for any reason like maybe the length, let me tell you it is TOTALLY worth it. Sometimes life can take up a lot of time and make it hard to just fully explore the story for a lot of reasons. personally this way my case, months ago probs around the 300chapters mark I was INLOVE with the book but I sadly had to focus on school and work, even then I still thought of this story and it found a way to drag my butt back over, THATS how great this story is. It Will literally find a way to resonate with you, and I believe that requires powerful writing skills from the author. On another note, Delana IS AN AMAZING AUTHOR. honestly it’s nearly impossible to find a interesting story, that is updated frequently and it not forgotten about. But jeez were we granted a miracle with delana. Don’t think you’ll find another author that has DIVINE writing, updates not even weekly but DAILY, and is super friendly plus interacts with her audience. I could literally ramble on for days about the book so if your still thinking twice to start let me just stop you there because this book will change your life! In a very good and wonderful way. So get some snacks, get comfortable and prepare to go through the roller coaster of emotions delana will take you.🤭 Enjoy!😆

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