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ShirimasenLv32yr
2022-11-22 11:00

I don't normally write reviews, but I just can't help it with this book. the characters are just *chef kiss* everyone has a charming and distinct personality, each with their own unique characteristics that make them stand out. their introductions are not too urgent, the writer gives you enough time to process new information without it being too boring or slow. on the topic of writing, can I just point out that the way delana writes emotions is pretty much godly?. emotions are not the only thing that makes her unique either. the scenery, the way she sets the atmosphere, simple words like "beautiful" and the usual description of "deep eyes", she has a way of somehow making them....how do I say it? meaningful? yeah, that's the word. it's not just a way to describe someone's appearance, it's the mc's pov of how he sees ml. it's how he can't help but fall to the other, it's how he always finds himself in a daze everytime ml talks to him. it's how precious he finds ml's smile. it's about how much he loves him. everyday life moments, and interactions are very enjoyable. simple pats on the head, and flicks on the forehead are enough to warm my heart. call me simple, but mystery is not something I enjoy. nor do I like detective work or police shenanigans. I rather things being straightforward since I hate complicated situations. I was actually hesitant to read this because of that. but delana somehow made me like it--? I don't know why. maybe it's because mystery is not the "only" focus. and the fact that she made me like the mc enough to care about his past. the world building is not really unique, it's the usual modren omegaverse. what makes me happy though is the fact that it's not mentioned every singlr second. it actually feels real, unlike the many hrny ah novels I've read (they're good too but still--) in short. it's like the perfect mix between real life and omgaverse. now for character design... sheeeeesh--- how can literally everyone be so hot? especially Mc. long hair? check.✔️ muscles? check.✔️ scars? check.✔️ teacher? check.✔️ lovable but also hot? CHECK✔️✔️. WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR🛐💕💀?! anyway. I guess you can tell I got tired halfway through writing this shizzy review. so I'm gonna take my leave. peace out *fades out of existence*.

Captured By The Cold Detective (BL)

delanasiwarka
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734 Chs

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delanasiwarkaAuthor

aaaa baby, I love this review so much!! 😭😭 gosh you just made my day. I'm so glad that you enjoy the story💕💕

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Newbie165Lv4

I wasn't planning on reading this because I'm not a usually a fan of Omegaverse plots because i find them unrealistic with no aesthetics at all, but now reading the really well written and cute review i actually want to give this book a try. Thanks i know that every author deserves such a dedicated reader like you...

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I love it

delanasiwarka:aaaa baby, I love this review so much!! 😭😭 gosh you just made my day. I'm so glad that you enjoy the story💕💕
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Hi everyone, delana's here! now that this book is one month old, I finally decided to drop a review 😆✨ if you're still hesitating to start this story, let me tell you what to expect: 1. This is an omegaverse, meaning somewhere in the future there will be a lil adorable baby! 🍼🥺💕 2. Our MC is the seme/top/gong Alpha protagonist. I know this is quite unusual, but do give this story a try and I will let you know the thrill of being on ✨top✨ 3. The main theme of this story is crime. not gonna lie, it will be heavy, dark, depressing and the plot doesn't focus on romance alone. if you're here for some dose of sweet fluffy romance, then *cough* expect to be disappointed. However, you will get fleshed out characters (not only the mains, but also sides) slice of life, familial and platonic relationships, and so on. 4. Mature scenes 😳 which I will tag on the title as [M] there are more content warnings which you can read at Auxiliary chapter 'Author's Note' but this is more or less enough to let you know what you will be getting into. Last but not least, welcome to 'Captured By The Cold Detective' and I wish you a pleasant stay 😊💗

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