I don’t like the cliche trope of killing the mom of in beginning. Sure it’s an easy way to make the reader sympathetic for the protagonist and give him a purpose but I didn’t personally enjoy reading about another character being tortured this way for the sake of the plot for no real reason. I did enjoy the monster-human interaction intricacies so good job on that should focus in more on that in the future.
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