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Haven_6mthReplied to Sorrest_Ch 2 2-Reincarnation- Haven_9mthCommentedCh 9 Chapter 9
- Haven_1yrReplied to LazytotheCoreCh 30 Come Eat Strawberries
- Haven_1yrPosted
I donāt like the cliche trope of killing the mom of in beginning. Sure itās an easy way to make the reader sympathetic for the protagonist and give him a purpose but I didnāt personally enjoy reading about another character being tortured this way for the sake of the plot for no real reason. I did enjoy the monster-human interaction intricacies so good job on that should focus in more on that in the future.
- Haven_1yrReplied to TerrywibuCh 153 A Simple Strategy Guide
- Haven_1yrPosted
This is a pretty good book but lacks some world building. Thank you author for sharing your creativity with us, itās very interesting! Overall I really like it and the world building is easy to fix. However, the price is too high for how short the chapters areā¦ please lower the price or lengthen the chapters a bit.
- Haven_1yrReplied to SollkiriCh 437 Status update
- Haven_2yrCommented
Oh thank goodness.
So, the Imp quickly stepped into the carraige and grabbed his bag of cooked meat, happily placing it down in front of the children. "Eat!" He exclaimed, and while Rudy, Clementine and Sammy seemed pretty hungry and wanted to grab some of it, Arc actually knew where that meat came from. - Haven_3yrCommentedCh 19 Chapter 19 - Charm Making from the First Hunt
- Haven_3yrCommented
I am so confused by this timeline
The gate of heaven was essentially the door to the heavenly realm. It held a massive teleportation array, that helped transport people to and from anywhere in the earthly realm. Ever since the fall of heaven, the gate itself suffered heavy damage yet thankfully the array itself was almost intact. Due to the damage that befell it, the array would only open once every one thousand years and would remain open for three days and three nights, giving mortal cultivators the window needed to enter the heavenly realm. After the three days, the array would close down and would not open for another year. - Haven_3yrCommented
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The woman shook, wracked with sobs. He shouldn't have done that. Shouldn't have intervened. It's no one's fault but her own. All because she couldn't do her job right. Couldn't take her of her family out there. Couldn't clean or put dinner on the table, there was no table. - Haven_3yrReplied to Eris31
No dont R.I.P š š½āāļø
He can't breathe. - Haven_3yrCommented
I couldnāt help the slow smile while reading this paragraph. xD
He didn't want to be insensitive. Of course, no girl would be okay after getting chased in the dark by strange men. It must have been a terrifying time for her in between the time she wandered off and by the time the three of them had found her again. - Haven_3yrCommented
Just run into his sword then why donāt you..
Siv uses her dagger to cut through her hair freeing herself from the tall man's grasp, she lunges as fast as she can toward Eluf, unfortunately, she is way slower than she has anticipated. The short man turns to her moments before she reaches him and plants his sword in her stomach. An excruciating pain shoots from her left side. - Haven_3yrCommented
IM NOT CRYING, YOURE CRYING!
"I kept the family together." - Haven_3yrCommented
This makes me happy āŗļø
"You've really won some face for this old man and I've been bragging to all my ex comrades for days now." - Haven_3yrCommented
Am I the only one who canāt stop thinking about the throw up and dirty water she never cleaned up?! š¤®š
Having just finished organising the bed, Sophie opened up her tablet to find out more information on combat skills of different races. - Haven_3yrCommented
Shiro totally gets how romance sims work- GIFTS x inifinty!!!
Shaking her head, Shiro walked out of the auction house and decided to visit Helion. She wanted him to make a set of armour for Lyrica as a present.