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Bookworm_2311
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2023-06-01 11:50

just read to the recent vol (vol 4) and this make me willing to give more review. I never thought the author will go his story to this path. I will said, this is masterpiece. Spoiler, after MC has struggle with every problem around him, volume 4 is the slice of life with many moral lesson that make you tears a happy tear but also a sad tear. Happy because it leads to how MC start to understand the value of life. Sad because the sins that the mc has done in the past, back attacking his moral.

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SliverLance
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did he get his revenge on that prince, the story is very good and iIlove it, but that prince must die...

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Discovering this novel when it was only about 13 chapters was like finding hidden gems. I haven't read a good novel like this in a long time. Looking at the previous reviews, you will know that world-building is the best thing about this novel. VERY INTERESTING World building, unique and enjoyable to follow, makes you want to know more about that world. Probably the best on this platform, in my opinion. Actually, the terms used are still quite mainstream terms, such as dungeons, orc monsters, churches that govern society, and kingdom themes, just like other novels, but HECK, There is something different about this novel from the others, somehow I feel a very strong medieval atmosphere when reading this like almost the same as our medieval world but with magic in the social. I know the author has done some research to create this from reading this. The plot is very well written, my expectations were low, but the author gave his best in the plot. I even cried in some parts (I'm the type of person who does not cry when reading books). The emotion in this story is amazing. Character development is great!!! And everything made sense to me. The relationships between the characters are amazing. Most importantly, this novel has illustrations that make us understand each character better. Great world building, a good plot, and good characters, and there is something different from other novels in this pf. CONS: grammar issue (minor). The author once said that English is not his first language, and so do I. Although I'm not perfect in grammar, I can tell that some of the author's punctuation and storytelling timing are often not good. But it's still in the acceptable stage for me. It's still an enjoyable read. It's just that, for people who really care (or strict!) about grammar, it's better not to read this, I don't really like it when people give low ratings just because of grammar (I know it is important but this wn is still have good grammar) If this author had a good English editor and improved the writing, this novel might be the best on the platform. Despite the flaws, I still give it full stars because I love this wn so much. Currently, in chapter 45, The complexity of the dungeon, the mysterious girl who makes people suicide, the anti govern, the council, the prince, and the church! The story hooked me.

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