Hello, I did that author noshame thing, I give 5 stars because I love my own story, and I hype with my own story. Here is what you will get from this story: -Character development -Kids MC that strong and smart -Romance -Medieval era setting -Quite complicated power system -Action with sword and magic -Moral Value And here is what you SHOULD NOT expect from this story -Good grammar (For people who are very biased with grammar, you can skip it, this is my first novel, and English is not my first language. You can judge my English just by reading this review, I merely bad at punctuation and poor choice of words. Cnc is welcome, I want to improve, and I will) -Harem (Maybe multiple girl will have love interests toward MC, but this is NOT harem) -Lemon (this story is 18+ because of its violence and gore)
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No harem yessssssssssss
When does the romance start - will it be late into the story?
It's already started in chapter 3, but not the story's focus. Romance will become more focus in chapter 30
I seen the tag multiple leads, how is that focused on in the story?
There will be sooo many exchanges of points of view in each chapter, so the focus of the story is not only on the MC but also on the characters around the MC and how the MC gets involved in the problems.
is there multiple mc's, seeing the multipleleads tag?
Yes, but only one protagonist. There were many mc in different pov and plot that link each other.
Sigh just finished reading an mtl novel. Not trying to go through that struggle again so soon. Wanna read something with better grammar for now. Gonna save it and come back to it later since it seems interesting
Just read it when you really could shut your brain for grammar stuff. Actually some people said it's not as bad as mtl, and it's keep better recently, but It's better to put your expectation low on the writing part. Just look at how I speak rn; that's how the grammar quality is.
