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_Sword_ImmortalLv122yr
2022-11-18 16:50

The book is amazing from what the first few chapters tell. And while the idea of powers is not novel the way you have depicted it instead of just tossing a devil fruit is what truly makes this stand out. Hopefully this would continue being amazing and i can keep reading it as the mc becomes the strongest. This has a lot of potential. I hope it doesn't disappoint in the future.

One Piece: The Rising Tide

Professor_Zzyzx
4.6
45 Chs

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Professor_Zzyzx
Professor_ZzyzxAuthor

Thanks for the review. As for the powers not being novel, I agree, but I also never really liked the choices mose protagonists made when choosing their “starter abilities” Which is what made me seriously consider which powers would work best for my main character and how those powers would compliment each other throughout the story. I also tried not to use the term “wishes” as I felt it would take away from the immersion make this exactly like every other fanfic involving a god.

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VOID_
VOID_Lv11

Definitely check out Rise of the Infinite Sovereign

2yr
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BlazingImmortal
BlazingImmortalLv13

the only problem I have with this fan fic is that I'm not sure if you know how big the one piece world actually is as Alabasta by itself is bigger than than the naruto world which is around 4× larger than ours where as the one piece world is actually nearly 3 and a half times bigger than our Sun

Professor_Zzyzx:Thanks for the review. As for the powers not being novel, I agree, but I also never really liked the choices mose protagonists made when choosing their “starter abilities” Which is what made me seriously consider which powers would work best for my main character and how those powers would compliment each other throughout the story. I also tried not to use the term “wishes” as I felt it would take away from the immersion make this exactly like every other fanfic involving a god.
2yr
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BlkM5k
BlkM5kLv14

he basically picked the same Powers three times each one of those characters can do the same thing

1yr
BlkM5k
BlkM5kLv14

in all actuality you really just pick three characters who all have extremely similar powers and can pretty much do the same thing what a waste

Professor_Zzyzx:Thanks for the review. As for the powers not being novel, I agree, but I also never really liked the choices mose protagonists made when choosing their “starter abilities” Which is what made me seriously consider which powers would work best for my main character and how those powers would compliment each other throughout the story. I also tried not to use the term “wishes” as I felt it would take away from the immersion make this exactly like every other fanfic involving a god.
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Professor_Zzyzx
Professor_ZzyzxAuthor

I’m pretty sure it’s a WebNovel tradition to be the first to review your own novel, so here it is. The parochial five star review. Honestly though, if you have any questions or concerns about the direction of the story, please feel free to leave a comment. I’ll do my best to respond. That being said, I do have a day job and I am currently in college, but I have a decent stockpile of chapters built up, so hopefully I can pump out a chapter every two days or so for the next few months.

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FakeRambo
FakeRamboLv14

............................................................................................................... its good ........................................

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Tom_tucker2
Tom_tucker2Lv3

It's a good novel but too slow. It took 6 chapters before the MC was reincarnated(3 of which were just on wishes), and he is still on the starter island after 30 ch. In other fanfictions the MC's would have already crossed the red line but the MC hasn't even started adventuring after 30ch.

2yr
BoltingPigeon
BoltingPigeonLv3

(Posting this review at just over 20 chapters) The updates have been consistent so far. There are practically no noticeable spellng/grammar errors. And it’s very clear the author is doing their research, not just on the One Piece world, but in many other varied topics to help flesh out the more finer details of the story. It is pretty slowed paced though, not that I particulaly mind. All in all this is a really solid start. Hopefully it doesn’t get dropped 🤞

2yr
Fenrirzero9999
Fenrirzero9999Lv13

Go to ONE PIECE AND GO GET The Baku Baku no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to eat anything. The eaten items can then be merged into and manifested from the user's body or be combined to create something else. It was eaten by Wapol AND THE The Gasha Gasha no Mi The Gasha Gasha no Mi is a non-canon Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to telekinetically disassemble objects and reassemble them into whatever they please, making them an Assimilation Human (合体人間 Gattai Ningen?, FUNimation: "Combinable Human"). It was eaten by Douglas Now 1

2yr
Rhys_Gray
Rhys_GrayLv4

good start lots of detail , good powers , wake up call start training get stronger.

2yr
LaughingArkBuilder
LaughingArkBuilderLv14

This story is shaping up to be REAL good.

2yr
Tranquil_Entity
Tranquil_EntityLv1

The author clearly knows what he is doing and talking about. There is a defined plot structure and a goal set out for the mc. The mc is surprisingly a very likeable character and it seems like transmigration didn't lower the mc's IQ. The progression if weak to strong, The mc is probably following his own path and that gives this book a few more bonus points. Overall, if you are looking for a good onepiece fanfic this is the one for you.

2yr
GangikaKing
GangikaKingLv10

The MC in this story is weird. He eats bugs and walks around every wear barefoot. I do love the powers he has tho. Obviously alot of thought went into this which is always nice 2 see. I do think the summary could to be buffd up abit becuz this story is seriously good and I feel it doesn’t do it proper justic. But maybe that’s just me 🤷‍♂️

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