Review Detail of DaasWolfe in The Tyrant Billionaire

I always take reviews very seriously. i'm planning to re write 22 chapter i already have ready based on the reviews of 5 people that has same opinion. So if you have any idea you want me to add or change please do notify me your participation won't go unnoticed. i will add your names at the end of the chapter and your contribution to the story.[img=update] also do help me choose a picture for the novel from what i currently have or propose one if you think its more suitable. i like this one the most