Descriptions are top-notch making the readers immersed into the story while still allowing the readers imagination to be creative. Story development is good and the MC is smart and most importantly, new and unique ideas. Well done. Keep up the good work. [img=update]
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a great job, over all a nice story a bit rushed, but i do rather you keep the current pace than to add fillars we are already sick of those.
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