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NotBeatrix
NotBeatrixLv22yr
2022-11-20 04:13

From the first page, I was pulled in. Although slightly cliche with the dream sequence, it does a wonderful job of setting up the plot and made me question what would happen next. We as readers get a good idea that Dax may be more than what meets the eye. Another thing I liked in particular was how the author was able to describe things. The details are nicely done and adds a basic foundation to the characters and the world. The world building also seems interesting, I liked the concept of the nanites and the advanced world that Dax lives in. Dax and Fay also hit it off pretty well, so I'm curious to see if that's a possible shipping route, lol. The first few chapters are a slow build up, but there is lots of foreshadowing that tells you to just hang on for the ride. With that being said, there were some grammatical errors and sometimes the character interactions fall flat, but other than that, this story has a lot of potential and I look forward to reading more chapters from this awesome author. Keep up the good work, Choas! :)

What?! I am the Reincarnation of the Magi King?!

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Matthias_Schmidt
Matthias_SchmidtLv15

nothing much to say about the book without revealing to much. You really need to read it but to sum it up: the Book is about a young dragon Drakie, who decided to adopt a human as his pet. In his infinite generosity, and the help of his ancient Wisdom that he had inherited from his forefathers through books, he educates his new pet in the arts of true magic. Something that has long been forgotten. So now: READ THE BOOK! and don't forget to hand over your powerstones and golden tickets.

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OakFlame
OakFlameLv14

G'day mates! A new novel by Choas, so you know it will be good! Writing Quality: There have been very few errors in the currently released chapters. 4.9/5 Stability of Updates: Tbd. Story Development: Seems interesting so far, and Choas's past stories have had interesting plots, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this one develops. Character Design: Just in the first few chapters, several interesting people have been introduced. Fey best girl? World Background: It seems to be a science/magic mixed world with monsters roaming the wilds, I hope to read more of Dax's adventures!

2yr
JoneBoneJones
JoneBoneJonesLv13

SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD must read this storY

1yr
Alphachoas
AlphachoasAuthor

Author here! Please check this work out and give it some love! I personally think it will be my best work to date! If you like overpowered mcs and academic settings, well you just might like it! So give it a read and please support me in the carnival!!

2yr
DemonWolf_69
DemonWolf_69Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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DelzGB
DelzGBLv14

You can always expect a fun and enjoyable story with many twist and turns that'll keep you on your seat from this author -- it's early on but I can definitely recommend this story

2yr
MilkChan666
MilkChan666Lv1

This author is known already for some pretty interesting works so finding this one is nice surprise! I hope this story goes far so thank you author for your hard work! <3

2yr
DeclareRB
DeclareRBLv1

Looks like a fresh new take and fun story about reincarnated mc. The beginning already looks intense so excited to see where this one goes.

2yr
Hannah_King_6215
Hannah_King_6215Lv14

The title page alone is inviting telling me it will be an interesting ride with Dax having unusual dreams. It sounds like it will be interesting to take this journey to find out how he becomes the Magi King! I hope others will also enjoy the ride.

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