Review Detail of McWms99 in Operative's Moderate Work

Item: Operative's Moderate Work
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

McWms99Lv21yrMcWms99

Sigh, the quality of writing is poor, so poor that I struggle to understand anything that's going on. The premise seems nice enough, but the execution is lacking in various areas. In order to really make this book shine grammatically it will need a rehaul. I hate to make this review solely on that fact alone but it's just that bad.

Operative's Moderate Work

0Mashroom

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0MashroomAuthor0Mashroom

Appreciate your thoughtful review, currently, I'll be taking this book for a break/pause to fix some of its problems. just like you and others mentioned. hopefully, you find this book enjoyable in the future.

1yr

McWms99Lv2McWms99

please do so you have a very unique concept I believe in you author, let me know when you've fixed your writing I'll more than gladly rereview your work

0Mashroom:Appreciate your thoughtful review, currently, I'll be taking this book for a break/pause to fix some of its problems. just like you and others mentioned. hopefully, you find this book enjoyable in the future.

1yr