Review Detail of Demons_and_I in Operative's Moderate Work

I won't lie. I just read 2 chapters, and I already have a head ache. I seriously didn't get a single thing from those two chapters. Trying to understand the sentences is like trying to use your tongue to paddle through a swamp in a leaky boat. This book, especially the first 2 chapters need serious editing The concept is nice and unique from the little I was able to understand but that is all. Please don't take this the wrong way. All you need is a bit of improvement in grammar skills as well as good editing, and you are good to go.👍