So I have written over 150 chaps and here is an honest review from what I have collected so far. Pros: 1. You won’t be disappointed. There are twists where you would least expect them and the story is really interesting with changing things every once in a while. From the start, things pick up an interesting route. 2. The system elements, other scenes and fights are not bad. They may not be perfect but they surely won’t disappoint you at all. You would be able to enjoy it and things get even better in the later chapters. 3. Writing quality is smooth. You can judge it for yourself. So this one is on you, though personally I feel like it’s quite smooth. 4. The plot and the world building is not exactly what you can call perfect but overall I worked enough to deliver enough ideas to make sure that you don’t lack any imaginative content. 5. The MC’s character is kind of childish + mature + kinda dark at times, but that is because of things that go on and happen. You will find your answers as you go through the story. Though it doesn’t hamper the story one bit and I am sure you will love him as you read more. Cons: 1. In the beginning of the story, especially around chapter 25, I made a decision that many didn’t like. I had a few things in mind that I failed to deliver, but please keep reading. I didn’t make that mistake again and even compromised for that previous mistake in the future. It wasn’t a wrong choice but I couldn’t provide enough information to give a basis for the decision. 2. Later on, I showed MC helping a couple of people or more, which many didn’t like, but later on I only focused on MC’s solo travel and stuff where he did most things by himself, rarely involving others. So if you find it annoying that he is helping a couple of ungrateful people for whatever reason, keep reading as the focus shifts pretty fast pretty soon in the next few chapters. 3. Next is… well I didn’t get any complaints whatsoever other than that, neither I found anything problematic. If I were to say one thing, it’s that I still haven’t shown any proper direction to the story, but I probably won’t be giving it right now as it’s a long story. For now, I will be focusing on adventure more compared to a final goal. So there is that. If you have any other questions, then please go ahead and ask. Good luck and happy reading!
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Hi there, just wanted to know how the harem will be handled here? will he have flings or would be dedicated to his harem. Also hope none of his girls would get forgotten...
He will stay loyal to all. The concept of fling is okay but I have not applied that here.
Indeed flings is kinda off if he already had harem
does this have yuri?
this sounds interesting but before I read will there be any yuri in this not a fan?
Later in the chapters there is a threesome scene in which I have shown 2 girl with MC and they kissed each other and were in top of each other as the MC f'd them. if you consider this yuri then it is the only scene. If you can skip that particular chapter, there is not a single of sign of Yuri anywhere in the story as I won't repeat this even if there is another MFF or MFFF. Good luck 🤞
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okay I thought this will have the Yuri but The MC is Unaware...it's good as long as the MC with them doing the Deed
Bro called it doing the deed 😂 legend
can you create a new story that is antiharem. story about a man that transmigrator into a reality with a heaven defining ability (cheat code) he conquers everything. when he reached the peak of his life. he discover another word Invaders a creatures from other realities. before the battle even began he was betrayed by his heroines then he discovered that all the heaven defining ability that he have. was given to him by the another invaders. with the last strength he has. he escaped the battlefield and fled because he don't have enough life force. but before he died he choose to create a system. a system that is going to help he's host to get more power so he use his having defining ability and the will of his own reality and other word reality. this is just the beginning of the story you can choose how the story will go and how is going to end I hope you like it this is just the creation of the system so you can make the system so overpowered please. antiharem please
Most readers ask for something to be added to the story, but you are taking it to a whole new level asking for a whole story lol
lol. the harem is too much. it's like they are all copying each other's work . once a protagonist get a system or a cheat he become soo arrogant. I'm not adding so much but come on this is another world. that we are talking about and another world that is ruled by power. and you are busy chasing women. forgetting that the easiest way to get to a man is true a woman.
Well harem is the dream of a lot of men. I don't care if its single fl or har*m, but I won't lie and say that I won't enjoy it if I had the option. And a lot of men make money and gain power to impress women (we are talking about the real world here, there are even studies on what men do to get the attention of women). So saying harem is too much isn't from ojective point of view.
that is rubbish. so you work hard so that you can make money or you work hard so that you can have power and the only thing that you want to use your power for is to get women or harem. please grow up
are u coming back to uldate with a more constant schedule? im at the end of the free chapters and as much as i want to keep reading after seeing the previous abandoned works in the hundreds of chapters, i wanted to ask to make sure this wouldnt be the next?
Well it's too high to be left unfinished. Plus I am trying my best to Restart the previous ones as well, just that life isn't really that forgiving these days. Hopefully I'll catch up to it.
good to know, just wanted to make sure before investing.
Do you have a discord server?
Everything all right man? you went from saying you were gonna increase the chap count to 3-4 a day and then instantly disappeared the day after, just wanna make sure your good?
Does his harem stay with him? or Does he leave them behind? I haven't started yet.
