Chimee_Chieke

please no romance. I'm really tired it . is better to have a person that gets stronger..

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please no romance and more chapter

please no romance.

forget romance. your story is good focus more on the story building. think of how to give him a mission. that's why story without no romance sometimes system is needed because it always give the protagonist missions to do. another thing in novels is power ranking. did the story power only stop at rank SSS. this is your first novel I will always follow your novel from today or you don't write 18 . you're doing a good job just think of how to write novels and the storey building that's all

I just read the beginning and I think I like it but please don't be Harem . we need a matured novel maturity is not all about harem. . please harem is too much. the worst part is that they make it the purpose of their life. let him get power get to the peak of power

I love this system. I love the system more than mc. don't put romance to the story the story is good like this more like getting power. I don't have a problem with him having one woman. I love how funny this is and how friendly he is with the system. if you add romance into this everything will charge

I love this system. I love the system more than mc

that is rubbish. so you work hard so that you can make money or you work hard so that you can have power and the only thing that you want to use your power for is to get women or harem. please grow up

lol. the harem is too much. it's like they are all copying each other's work . once a protagonist get a system or a cheat he become soo arrogant. I'm not adding so much but come on this is another world. that we are talking about and another world that is ruled by power. and you are busy chasing women. forgetting that the easiest way to get to a man is true a woman.