Review Detail of Kirilliy in Naruto : The Fire Fist Ninja

That’s bad, really bad. Minato and Kushina are awful in this fic for no reason, also why don’t you just make 4 parts of Kiuubi? I mean in this fic his chakra seems to be like a cake, you can divide it into any number of pieces. And yeah Ace don’t suit well in this fic.