Kirilliy

Now it can continue in two ways, first we lose rumble-rumble no mi, and second where we have lightning powers and also can swim

Firstly I need to apologise for my English, that’s not my first language. This fanfic is amazing. It’s really hard nowadays to find such an interesting and unique story. I really would join your patreon to support you but unfortunately it doesn’t work with my country’s cards so I can only say how good is tour story to cheer you up, hope that you won’t quit this fanfic and be patient.

Jolteon… Not an obvious choice, that’s cool!

Author my English is very bad so I will be brief. I love you!!! Really!!! You already are one of the best Dc/Marvel writers because you're not a serial killer

That’s bad, really bad. Minato and Kushina are awful in this fic for no reason, also why don’t you just make 4 parts of Kiuubi? I mean in this fic his chakra seems to be like a cake, you can divide it into any number of pieces. And yeah Ace don’t suit well in this fic.

Yes, as everybody say Mc is weak, but I don’t see the problem. Obviously the author is trying to make the story more realistic, with mc without any cheat.Main character is getting better, yes he still can’t win any chunin but, he have been reincarnated in a body that had never trained just for year, and he already is low-chunin-high-genin. He is getting stronger, it would be better if author made some timeskip or just boost Mc’s power increase, but it is not big problem.