Good story! I'm really liking the idea and the story so far with 10 chapters in. The quality of writing is pretty good and the MC seems promising. I just hope he doesn't become stupid at some point, but so far things look good. Overall it's a fantastic start, so keep up the good work, Author-san!

It's a gold mine y'all, I'm going to see how much gold (chapters) I can mine (read) before it runs dry (before the story starts to suck) I'll keep you all updated.

This FF is a hidden gem 🔥! Great writing quality, very few grammar mistakes, and amazing story development. The most thing I like about this book is the improvement in terms of writing. There is a huge difference in quality if you compare the first two chapters to the last two ( chapters 39 and 40). The Author is obviously improving his writing skills with each chapter which is really great. You have my respect Author! Keep up the good work sir!

In the info of fic it was written what will a person from our world will do in the place of luffy Well guess what he does Same thing as cannon luffy nothing else I don't know why people do this if they want to copy paste cannon

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.... author has absolutely no F idea what he is doing.. the system is so broken that im 99% sure he will drop this within 100 chapters. Author made a completely linear system so broken... mc only needs to beat up 183 level 1 people/pirate/marine... i repest just pure levels 1 and he can reach level 60.... its ridiculous... lets not forget thst this amount is reduced to 36 people if they are between leveld 10-20.... or a mere 18 persons if they are between 20-30.... author definitely had no idea what he was doing. Took a random guess on how level up works, picked something easy and hoped for the best... lets not mention thar by chapter 4... mc has been in one opiece for less than 1 week and he has so manh broken abilitied and his stats are so high that it breaks the whole story.

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Well.... i am not good with review but i really loved idea and story so go on author ^^

Why can't you just train yourself? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔__________________________________________________________________________________

Very good fic, in my 10 one piece fan fictions atm. Pace of him and his crews strenghting is very good. Though I feel that MC should be on his way to the Red line as the pace of the adventure is very slow, except if the author is trying to make this a very long fanfic, thought I don’t mind due to the good writing and character pacing and dialogue. Very very good!! Keep it up author, I hope you don’t drop.