The idea is really cool and I rarely read any fanfic with a female protagonist so I was excited, but the writing is very average, the protagonist's personality is too childish for me and the events that arise like leaving Nuoding City and the beginning of the fights are very rushed and even forced, in addition to what bothered me a lot, the protagonist talks a lot about the things she wins without hiding anything and in the middle of an arena she showed her second spiritual ring which is a Purple one, which will attract a lot of attention from bad or good people, but she just did that and that's it, which seemed pretty stupid to me, Honestly, those two stars they're giving are just for the idea (Google Translator)
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