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Hie_Hie
Hie_HieLv112yr
2022-12-14 12:47

It's not the best but not the worse either I guess. Although one thing that I very dislike about this is the romance/relationship between mc and lumine. It's very uncomfortable man when mc keeps calling Lumine princess. And it's only been like 2 days in the story and they already started to act like lovebirds. Have to drop this unfortunately but it might be your cup of tea if you like story with fast romance and a lot of flirting in it

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TheSentience
TheSentienceLv14

Giving someone a nickname doesn’t automatically mean romance though this name in particular could easily be seen that way.

True_Vanity
True_VanityLv4

Sure it’s a bit weird but the story is otherwise good enough, no need to drop just cause of fast romance

Hie_Hie
Hie_HieLv11

Well everybody got their own like and dislike. Personally, I feel uncomfortable reading the interaction between lumine and Mc so im not going to force myself reading this but again im not saying this story is extremely bad or anything like that just that it's not for me

True_Vanity:Sure it’s a bit weird but the story is otherwise good enough, no need to drop just cause of fast romance
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Leylin_123
Leylin_123Lv14

Cada quien con sus gustos, yo le digo cariño o corazón a una chica apenas la conozca si me cae super Bien y me siento cómodo con ella.

Hie_Hie:Well everybody got their own like and dislike. Personally, I feel uncomfortable reading the interaction between lumine and Mc so im not going to force myself reading this but again im not saying this story is extremely bad or anything like that just that it's not for me
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BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Ty.

NeroEnthusiast
NeroEnthusiastLv4

Bruh have you actually read other genshin fanfics this is peak genshin fanfic

Hie_Hie
Hie_HieLv11

Read the one made by unusual hilicurl. Now that is peak genshin fanfic. This is not as far as I remember

NeroEnthusiast:Bruh have you actually read other genshin fanfics this is peak genshin fanfic
JustSomeRandomNPC
JustSomeRandomNPCLv4

i agree with you my brother 😌

Hie_Hie:Read the one made by unusual hilicurl. Now that is peak genshin fanfic. This is not as far as I remember
flynn0_7574
flynn0_7574Lv4

unusual hillcurl is very good at making genshin fics. this is something that I can agree to

Hie_Hie:Read the one made by unusual hilicurl. Now that is peak genshin fanfic. This is not as far as I remember
lovemeganegals
lovemeganegalsLv4

Bro stop the 🧢

NeroEnthusiast:Bruh have you actually read other genshin fanfics this is peak genshin fanfic
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