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Farue
FarueLv31yr
2023-06-16 18:17

Class awakening blah blah blah envious people feeling pity for MC blah blah blah heartfelt moment with elder sister providing for family blah blah blah becoming god blah blah blah. Story is extremely standard, but decent. No annoying fatty friends, beautiful class princesses, or villainous young masters to pester the MC so I give it points for that. My primary issue is that there isn't a lot of real good potential or progression in this novel. For context, only a couple rank 3 in city, but MC gets dragon that can fight multiple rank 6's. MC literally has the equivalent of an orbital strike cannon and its just one dimensional. There is no room for real conflict when the MC can just point in a direction and delete that direction. There's so much just raw power immediately there isn't room for interaction with the world. What problem can't the MC solve with just this shear strength, where does he go from here. He doesn't, since any personal strength growth is meaningless compared to the dragon. This doesn't have the worldbuilding or characterization or quality of One Punch Man, so it's a major issue with the novel.

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uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

You don't like the fatty friend?

Monsieur_Failure
Monsieur_FailureLv13

it's an overuse trope that usually doesn't done right. In my experience of reading webnovel, those fatty friend were just as a comedic relief with no apparent personality, they don't even serve any purpose for the plot progress.

uflesh940:You don't like the fatty friend?
uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

IMO decent fatty friends are more common than you'd think. Regardless, I prefer the protagonist having a fatty friend to the popular alternative: having no male friends at all.

Monsieur_Failure:it's an overuse trope that usually doesn't done right. In my experience of reading webnovel, those fatty friend were just as a comedic relief with no apparent personality, they don't even serve any purpose for the plot progress.
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