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Rizki_Caturianto
Rizki_CaturiantoLv11yr
2023-01-23 09:24

A great Harry Pottee fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😁👍👍 I usually don't like fanfic story where MC become the character (either main or side character), but I quite like this story.. I like how Sirius change so much in this story, and he also made Harry change (that what Godfather/Guardian should do to Harry.. I hope Sirius also do it in film or book).. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author san 😁👍👍👍

Sirius Black (SI)

LazyWizard
4.7
69 Chs

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LukeDoyle21
LukeDoyle21Lv4

Good to see some more Sirius stories, excited to see where you go with it

2yr

Golias
GoliasLv5

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4

Evaluation: Subpar. (This is too hyped & spammed for high star review). WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical error, however, monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process which is just a repeat of the cannon book of HPVerse. 4/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. Too book-cannon compliant which begs to differ what is the SI for? 2/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. Lack of utilization of HPVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. Too wholesome for my tastes. The only difference MC-SI made here is to stabilize Sirius Black & Harry mental state. 2/5 US: The stability of updates are good enough as author-san made sure to publish quality writing with less mistakes over quantity. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

1yr
SDIVAD
SDIVADLv6

I haven’t read this year but you can’t take this story siriously ….. ….. ….. …. …. …. … … … .. .. .. . . . I’ll show myself the door

1yr
hero4hire
hero4hireLv11

good novel, but not my type. Mc get too much into role playing, so much so that he is 'sirius' with cannon knowledge instead of the other way around.

1yr
Wesley_Hylry
Wesley_HylryLv14

are you Serious? likr... it's okay that you have the free option, but that falls short

1yr
Tony_Pecoraro
Tony_PecoraroLv5

A great read but you got too finish please. There’s not too many ff with sirus black.🙏.……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

9mth
DIAMEN
DIAMENLv13

This is one of the best Harry Potter si fanfics I read and I am a person so reads almost read all Harry Potter fanfics in FF ,MTL and WN. keep going bro u have my full support 💯

11mth
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