Decent idea but the execution of it sadly failed. The story comes out feeling dry and boring. So far Mc hasn’t stumbled into major events or characters and I get that author wants to advance with a steady pace but there is a difference between steady and agonizingly slow. I have seen many aspiring authors makung the same mistake, they lose many of their readers because they stretch the introduction/training arcs for too long with nothing noteworthy truly happening.
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I understand your point, and thank you for the review, although I don't think the pace of the story is ridiculously slow. My writing pace, yes, one chapter per week, and still many readers follow this fanfic. I am inexperienced in writing, that's a fact, and there are things I could do to make the pace more interesting. I have many ideas, and that sometimes becomes a problem, connecting these ideas at an appropriate pace. However, the main character is not so inactive, only in the first 10 chapters. I don't know how far you've read. The proposal of this fanfic is not to write about Harry Potter and his adventures, but about the magical world from a different perspective. So much so that Vincent starts at Hogwarts two years before Harry.
