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Neco_Arcussy
Neco_ArcussyLv151yr
2023-05-30 09:36

TLDR: solid story, interesting take on the relationship between gods (author clearly knows a lot about that stuff), A little glossy on the details about powers, but makes up for it with decent character development, overall funny without beating dead horses too much. feels a little rushed in story development at points but I can see it being fine if it takes the route I believe it will. i wish the author would update a wee bit more but as long as the posting stays consistent it's no big deal.

First Demonic Dragon

AnathaShesha
4.5
858 Chs

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AnathaShesha
AnathaSheshaAuthor

Thank you for the honest review! I appreciate the kind words and I will do my best to improve upon the points that you have mentioned. 🙂 But regarding the update schedule I wish I could post more but my real life is kind of hectic as I have a day job, a baby, a girlfriend to keep happy, and a whole other book to write. If I rush to just put out chapters, they would be shorter and I feel like the quality would suffer as well.

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OneArmedImmortal
OneArmedImmortalLv14

haven't read the story yet but willing to give it a try... if I may ask just from your profile name... do you happen to have gained inspiration from Korean novel&manhwa "Second Life Ranker"... I remember Anantha was Yeon's brother's wife or sth like that?🤔 Btw I am big fan of Second life Ranker especially it's mythological part

AnathaShesha:Thank you for the honest review! I appreciate the kind words and I will do my best to improve upon the points that you have mentioned. 🙂 But regarding the update schedule I wish I could post more but my real life is kind of hectic as I have a day job, a baby, a girlfriend to keep happy, and a whole other book to write. If I rush to just put out chapters, they would be shorter and I feel like the quality would suffer as well.
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Moussa_Mehassouel
Moussa_MehassouelLv1

ist oky

1yr
Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

author plz write more words in a single chapter ts too short...it's like a yummy meal you are enjoying but before you are satisfied it's already over!!

AnathaShesha:Thank you for the honest review! I appreciate the kind words and I will do my best to improve upon the points that you have mentioned. 🙂 But regarding the update schedule I wish I could post more but my real life is kind of hectic as I have a day job, a baby, a girlfriend to keep happy, and a whole other book to write. If I rush to just put out chapters, they would be shorter and I feel like the quality would suffer as well.
1yr
AnathaShesha
AnathaSheshaAuthor

How far are you?? Cause I think around chapter two hundred or so none of my chapters are less than 1800 words

Eternal_Shu:author plz write more words in a single chapter ts too short...it's like a yummy meal you are enjoying but before you are satisfied it's already over!!
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Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

I am around 57....I guess shld read the novel further hehe

AnathaShesha:How far are you?? Cause I think around chapter two hundred or so none of my chapters are less than 1800 words
1yr
Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

btw does his harem increase more than 8 or is it the limit for this novel??

AnathaShesha:How far are you?? Cause I think around chapter two hundred or so none of my chapters are less than 1800 words
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AnathaShesha
AnathaSheshaAuthor

It’s supposed to be eight yea BUT imma pushover so if the readers tell me that there’s another girl that they want in the harem then I’ll hold like polls and stuff before I change anything

Eternal_Shu:btw does his harem increase more than 8 or is it the limit for this novel??
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Eternal_Shu
Eternal_ShuLv13

yep good thing!!

AnathaShesha:It’s supposed to be eight yea BUT imma pushover so if the readers tell me that there’s another girl that they want in the harem then I’ll hold like polls and stuff before I change anything
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Tiwari_Aditya
Tiwari_AdityaLv4

I have a question whether MC has iq average iq, above average,or just dumb is he a wife collector, pervert ,Chad ,hero ?

1yr
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Great story Great characters Some of the best world building I’ve read I really did this to cover the review asking the author to add MC’s mom into the Harem

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DaoistsJV1Jj
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This novel is extremely cringy. I can't read anymore as it kills me to try. Please forgive my harshness but I only reviewed this because webnovel recommend it. [img=faceslap]

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Red_dragon
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I clicked this because it was on feature and piqued my intrest with over 100 free chapters and thought it would be bad or something but I was so wrong it’s honestly one of the best novels I have read on this app definitely top 10 and if there’s a mistake in the spelling or whatnot if you comment on it Anatha is quick to fix it and he/she seems like a nice person so I highly recommend not only is the world,character,and plot 10/10 but Anatha gives their best to make it great

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PIasma
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I found this in my recomendations and I can honestly say that I am very impressed with this novel. The quality of the story, so far, in regards to pretty much everything is amazing. The overall grammer and spelling of the novel is just awesome, and the world building has been great. There are some cliches but they are still added to the story pretty well. The character all have there own personalities and thoughts, and I appreciate how the author changes POV every so often to let us see into the minds of the main characters (he states whos POV it is as well). The authors titles for the chapters are funny and overall very good which gets me excited for what I’m about to read. The only thing I question about the story so far is how early in the book Exedra is to accept things like killing and exterminating bloodlines over something that didnt really hurt him. Which happened on only the second day of him being there. Other than that I am honestly shocked at how good this novel is despite it being the authors first novel. If you are into fantasy, reincarnation, and a bit of seggs this is a great story (though the seggs aint necessary). P.S. the seggs are pretty good.

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TruthHurtsX1000
TruthHurtsX1000Lv2

Reveal spoiler

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Toothpick_Of_doom
Toothpick_Of_doomLv15

None human MC with evolution as long as he doesn ’t become a wife collector this should be a fun ride

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DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

Started off pretty interesting to say the least. However, it’s another story where the author interprets dark themes meaning mass sexual assault of women… it’s not an interesting plot point, and quite obviously not enjoyable and yet the descriptions of the actions are decently in detail as if I’m supposed to enjoy it. Within like 5 ch you get introduced to one of the new harem members and the noble that is famous for kidnapping women, physically abusing and assaulting them with vivid detail on how he forces them to use their mouths before tossing them aside. How he wants his servant to go get the husband and brother out of the dungeon so that they are forced to watch… The women of the story are pretty well thought out, but the rest of the story will give me some new form of ptsd at this rate Are you alright author?

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CH1LLGUY
CH1LLGUYLv4

review from chapter 88. story so far has just been meh. It really is a nice read but bland. I feel as though the Mc is a Gary stu. most females easily fall for him. gets married out of nowhere easily. Mc constantly keeps having things go his way. He is op for his level. fighting above his level constantly. So if you really like op Gary stu Mc read this. I'm not trying to be mean as well. It is just the way I see it. which has made me drop it. Since I just find to boring at this point.

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