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2022-11-16 21:35

The storyline is pretty good but the vague concept of both magic and cultivation has a downside in it. I don't know how you will make a equal tiers between magic and cultivation. I also doubt about the lifespan of both system as cultivation increases lots of lifespan on one advancement. .. But hats off for trying. .keep it up

My adventurous journey in another world

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