The writing is pretty good but man, This fic does something I don't like, like making the mc appear smarter than he is by making the people around him dumber. Other thing I don't like is how this isn't even the dxd world, it's the fanon dxd world where canon is disregarded because it doesn't fit the narrative of the story, I don't mind things like that but man this story does it pretty badly in my opinion. Another thing is that I just don't like the mc he is just a ball of angst and no personality whatsoever, why should I care about him when the man has a personality of a cardboard cutout. Yeah so that's all I have to say.
Alcoholic_Panda
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LIKEAnother thing, the mc keeps screaming how rias is a brat and childish(when she is literally a child) and the funny thing about this is he is probably the most childish and immature person in the peerage because atleast the other members get a pass due to them being children's but what about him. I don't mind the way he acts I don't mind him not liking Rias, what I mind is the fact in the way it was implemented and how swallow the mc actually is while crying about rias being spoiled and what not.
Called me an idiot and then said there is no argument to be held for absolute bs reason, one doesn't need 20/20 vision to see who the idiot is.
Uncle_potato33:You my fine sir are an idiot. Rias is spoiled you can sugar coat how ever you like but everything you have said in your review is obsolete because in all honesty there is no argument to stand on for you because of it
leo26:Called me an idiot and then said there is no argument to be held for absolute bs reason, one doesn't need 20/20 vision to see who the idiot is.
Rias is a spoiled/entitled ans self centered princess at least at the start. Even if ppl talk about diff with LN. Each servant is revived to be a tool. With the choice I beleive i would prefer eternal death over slavery. Even if as some argue with rose tinted glasses of a wonderful slavery. And let's be honest the world building of DxD is really original and interesting but it's an 'ecchi' work full of fan service and i personaly find most main characters not very likable or annoying.
will always support the Rias hate because of one books on Wattpad written by a illiterate moron been on the hate train since đđ¤
leo26:Another thing, the mc keeps screaming how rias is a brat and childish(when she is literally a child) and the funny thing about this is he is probably the most childish and immature person in the peerage because atleast the other members get a pass due to them being children's but what about him. I don't mind the way he acts I don't mind him not liking Rias, what I mind is the fact in the way it was implemented and how swallow the mc actually is while crying about rias being spoiled and what not.
Uncle_potato33:You my fine sir are an idiot. Rias is spoiled you can sugar coat how ever you like but everything you have said in your review is obsolete because in all honesty there is no argument to stand on for you because of it