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if his magic power level is at B, I think it's too high for a top class junior magic knight

I hope the storyline still changes unlike the original, and in my opinion the barrier created by Obito should not be a problem for Satoru unless it is the Four Red formation implemented by the combination of the four Hokage

the story you wrote is really interesting, this is the best danmachi fanfic I have ever read. keep up the spirit of the writer.

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can't you at least focus on mc, because for me the first impression when reading this fanfic is not good, that's what makes me not want to continue reading it. this is my honest opinion

this story is very confusing, in my opinion writing this fanfic is very messy, you also write too much pov of each character without you focusing on mc