Review Detail of VaibhavMishra in BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

Item: BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
Rating: 4.6

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VaibhavMishraLv411mthVaibhavMishra

In my opinion, only problem in your novel is that it is very slow . if you solve this problem, then this story has very high potential . You should also focus more on Worldbuilding too .

BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

PilgrimJagger

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PilgrimJaggerAuthorPilgrimJagger

The first half of the first volume was indeed slow, but then I accelerated in the latter part. From the second volume, things are much faster.

11mth

zeo_nitroLv4zeo_nitro

where does the second volume start

PilgrimJagger:The first half of the first volume was indeed slow, but then I accelerated in the latter part. From the second volume, things are much faster.

7mth