Review Detail of MrPhalanx in BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

After reading quite a lot of chapters, I have to say, it really starts to show that you a first time writer. As good the start was, as bad i was disappointed later. The reason? Are you trying to make a second Naruto or somethin? Because this useless stretching really annoys me, it's similar those 1000+ chapter Chinese novels (Like Mighty Levelling System), where there is no end in sight. And the lot of missed opportunities. You started the MC as an abused , typical loner type who can rely no one at the start, it was pretty interesting, and YOU RUINED IT with this annoying friendship trope, where the MC can struggle as much as he wants, he still cannot get rid theese drags on him. I wanted to give you e WORSE score, but because the first chapters were perfect, that would be unfair..