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Triskelion
TriskelionLv121yrTriskelion

could have became my best novel . author could have not wasted that much chapters for some side story that i felt bored .after this beast horde part somehow make mc go to different country where he can grow fast atleast faster than in current country he lives in

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PilgrimJagger

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Triskelion
TriskelionLv12Triskelion

somehow i feel that current country is limiting his potential to reach his peak

PilgrimJagger
PilgrimJaggerAuthorPilgrimJagger

It is limiting his potential; that was the whole point of the story. As for him going away: I can't simply make him go to another country. I need some things to happen. I want to remind you that Erik is still relatively weak compared to the adults; I can't make him go into a forest full of monsters and expect him to survive miraculously; he needs to grow sufficiently strong to at least protect himself to some degree, that was one of the first things I said in the novel. The world I created is very precise, with monsters around the city and inside the various nations that have specific power levels. I don't want to make spoilers; I will only say that I already have plans for what is going to come.

Triskelion:somehow i feel that current country is limiting his potential to reach his peak
Bananasenpiiii
BananasenpiiiiLv4Bananasenpiiii

exactly,mc pov is so little in the later chapters I just skipped all it's not enjoyable for me.