Review Detail of Lol1san in BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

Ok, the first thing I would like to say is: thank you very much for the review. I apologize for the following reply, which will be very long. Though, if you want to have a clearer picture of the situation, you may consider reading what I'm about to write. Now, let's start addressing some points: 1) In a society where everything revolves around brain crystal powers, somehow obtaining a plethora of them is not OP. Clearly, you haven't read any novels with the MC being able to steal powers from others; otherwise, I can't understand why you say something like this. Not only this, but the MC is basically the ONLY ONE who can increase his energy. No one can do this as it is fixed for everyone BUT HIM. If this isn't OP, I don't know what it is. I would also like to address the fact that a story, to be readable, doesn't necessarily need a cheat or OP powers, and I don't understand why the fact that I placed a, let's say, "semi-OP" power should be a demerit. 2) The setting may be futuristic, yeah. But tell me, what would be the point of acquiring knowledge about how to make a laser pistol, which is useless for basically any Thaid but at low levels? What would be the point of getting knowledge about the teleportation device if he doesn't even have the means to produce it? One could argue that he could have gotten the knowledge to get better results at school, but whoever says it probably missed the fact that school was almost over, and I made it clear that, basically, only a few classes remained, and most were related to BCPs. 3) He didn't use analysis on Conal, Orson, and Logan until the very last because he didn't plan to kill them initially. What would have been the point of analyzing them? Erik simply hoped and believed they would leave him alone once they saw he was not trash anymore, and that's because he was initially naive. He was wrong in the end, and that was the whole point of the situation. He decided to kill them only once they took things too far, and besides, he already knew he was stronger than them since he defeated them during the cafeteria incident. 4) You say that it is pointless to get more BCP because he can't use them. This is exactly the reason why he hunts Thaids and tries to level up since, as I've already said, he is the only one who can increase his amount of energy. 5) You say that it is pointless for a human being to try and improve his situation. I don't get it. He killed three people that tormented him for years, and because of this, has he no right to wish for a better life just because of that? Does this mean that, basically, any person who went to jail should rot in prison forever, never having a chance to change for the better and make amends? What is wrong with you? Besides, you clearly don't know how murderers, psychopaths, and the like live, because if you think that any murderer out there doesn't have a family or friends, you are a fool. 6) You said that the MC wanders aimlessly and with no goal, but the thing is that it is you who probably confused everything. As I stated initially, Erik, at the beginning of the story, much like any sane person in the world, wanted to have a good life: tons of friends, a girlfriend, a good-paying job, and so on. Later, things slightly change because of his awakening, forcing him to pursue strength because of the will to get freedom. Here is where my book differs from many others: I gave Erik a relatable goal. He doesn't want to become powerful for the sake of it, like basically every book on this platform. He doesn't want to become the S-ranked adventurer just because why not.  7) Power levels are all but unbalanced, as not only have I spent a lot of time thinking about them, but I even have excel sheets with every level strictly inside some numerical values. Though I admit the system I devised is not so simple, and I should explain things better, which I was already planning to do, but anyway. Just for the sake of clarity, I will explain things here.

I understood the author intentions, this review it's too bad in my opinion... I think the poor Erik it's Just a teenager without a family, that could not develope his personality normally, so I think this development it's kinda normal. In a militaristic world with war and monsters "It takes a fool to remain sane" I think. I like also Amber, the only "normal person" apparently.

I mean, my English is not very good, but I didn't mention anything about being 'Op'. I said that I didn't see the advantage of the system or its use. He may be the only person in the world who can get those powers but he doesn't even use them properly. It would make more sense if he could, for example, level up his powers or train them properly. The people he got his powers from have been training him for years, but he just seems to collect them. And here I called him a psychopath because he's not bothered by the thought of killing people just for that. ◦ About second point. Dude, aren't you underestimating your own power? I'm not saying he should learn how to make laser guns. I'm just saying he should benefit from his advanced knowledge. Engineering? He can learn, why not? At first he hacked Logan thanks to the system and now he can hack it himself. More precisely, he can learn about Dna, Brain crystal and mana veins that the system directly mentions. At the simplest, he can make money by utilizing the internet! He can get a job instead of working in the d♡♡n field. Are you saying that in a futuristic society he can't use the internet? ◦ Here again, you misunderstood me about the analysis. I'm saying that instead of using it only at the last moment against his opponent, he could have used it to determine the level of his power. That way he could distribute stat points more evenly. At the beginning of the story it wasn't clear if his strength was above or below standard. ◦ I said it was pointless for him to get Bcp, but that was because I was uncomfortable with the overall power balance and the system. I'm not saying he shouldn't kill the thaids or take their bcp, but I'm saying that the way he sometimes thinks about how to take from people, and even kills and takes from some of them, gives me the idea that he is mentally sick. ◦ Is it pointless for a human being to try and improve his situation... xD like I said above he still has ideas about extracting people's brain crystals. For example he was upset that he couldn't extract the bcp of a dead guy he saw on the road or he said how good it would be if he could get the healer's ability for himself. You're the one who wrote that your mindset has changed in this way man, not me! It doesn't matter if someone like that feels good being around friends and pretty girls, he will eventually go back to that mentality. I question his motive because he kills people for it. You realize this is not a fight for survival. He can somehow live again, but his powerlessness doesn't allow it. Then why should he get stronger? You say you give a reason but his reason is to build a farm or to get out of the country...

Dude, you're a fanboy who gave the novel 5 stars! Even your comment 'Woww this novel is great! ehehehe...' No matter how bad you think it's a review. And I criticized what I saw lacking here. But you know what? Criticism doesn't have to be bad. You should try it sometime and talk about the good parts. I also gave reasons there and my general annoyance is the system, the power levels and Mc's mental health. To you, Eric may be great but to me, he's just a psychopath. Not just because he killed 3 bullies but because he looks at other people as if they are just a source of Bcp and ignores that they are human beings.