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EvilBlueCrystal
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Why would Hinata be worried about Boruto learning Chakra, they are ninjas. How did Boruto learn what chakra is and to channel is so quickly? Why isn't Naruto showing him what Chakra is first? So the Mc never practiced water walking? There's no way he can learn jutsu in the first attempt or copy it unless he has Sharingan or some talent. Boruto goes to a village he doesn't explore, or explain how different it is from Konoha. Boruto says he wants strength but he doesn't kill or steal for it, he doesn't do any research or expirements, he doesn't use his own bloodline jutsu. He learns a Keke genkai by practicing, that's not how it works, why do you think its called bloodline limit. His Byagukan is not never used, but suddenly he can use Jougan. Why Iwabe so annoying? Why is Mitsuki badly written? The side characters and filler is also boring. So boruto doesn't make use of Sumire but also doesn't kill her after she tried to kill him. It doesn't make sense for a spy to try to destroy the village and not be executed or imprisoned. The fight with Nue is bad and confusing, how is Boruto able to do anything but Jonins are useless? How can he use purple lighting? The other villages can't create purple lighting jutsu after 100 years but somehow Boruto can create it without training in less than a weak? So Boruto just gives everyone free jutsu for no reason? And it's not even explain what jutsu they were practicing. Why is Boruto fighting anyone if he can beat them in one move? Why are there random cuts in chapter, why did the pacing and story become worse compared to the start?

Boruto: Apotheosis

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Primordial_Saiyan
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I'll admit, you have a point. The chapter in which he fights Shin was such a curve ball and did a total 180° from the chapters prior to that. It still hasn't been explained why and how he had those visions or whatever you call it of the future he had and how he even magically knew of things as if he was some reincarnator with meta knowledge. This fic is fill with plot holes from the very first chapter.

Auther_Uchiha
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He is right y'know the story is good and with Grammarly(If you don't already have it) and his page-long explanation it will boom into a 4.67-star story.

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