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Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv42yr
2022-11-28 19:17

Evaluation: Above Average WQ: Several grammatical errors which can be fix via grammarly. Make sure to always check your usage of pronounce. Well thought and long chapters. 3/5 SD: With slow to average pace of development without affecting the story & MC progression. 4/5 CD: MC isn't that OP with his chosen skills/blessings as the ability matches the power scale of ASOIF. 5/5 US: A stable update for an FF which is a plus. 5/5 WB: ASOIF, A decade before Roberts rebellion. I can't put the exact words yet as the story progression isn't that much. 5/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

GAME OF THRONES Jaehaerys Targaryen

MachoSpartan047
4.8
27 Chs

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Pufferdung
PufferdungLv4

The story is good if you can get past the grammar. The writing needs a lot of work, though.

1yr

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Vighnesh_Sahu
Vighnesh_SahuLv12

better than anything i can say.. i love it better than anything i can say.. i love it better than anything i can say.. i love it better than anything i can say.. i love it

2yr
Xiphos_Gladius_03
Xiphos_Gladius_03Lv1

Very nice! I hope you can see this fanfic to it's end and don't discontinue it. Seeing Aerys show love to anyone was an intresting moment. Good luck!

2yr
AgustinaGM18
AgustinaGM18Lv10

Me gusta!!! Quiero saber mas!!!!’n [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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kosmas_kosmas
kosmas_kosmasLv4

It's intresting

2yr
andres_cruzado_7909
andres_cruzado_7909Lv2

Don't give it up.................................................... ........................................................... ........................................................... ...

2yr
Gomtuu76
Gomtuu76Lv4

Great read the story is great the writing style is sub par but the overall story makes it worth the pain. if you can improve your Grammer and get better at dialogs it will get 5 stars easy. keep up the good work.

1yr
Luis_Salinas_8936
Luis_Salinas_8936Lv4

I hope the next chapter comes out real soon

10mth
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