Review Detail of Gabriel_1481 in The Strongest of Japan: Accelerator (Don't read its disappointing)
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As I remember at the beginning of the chapter they said that the protagonist had the same personality as the accelerator but he doesn't. The writing is bad it has a lot of mistakes and it's not interesting
The Strongest of Japan: Accelerator (Don't read its disappointing)
OGVipex
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Moi tu me parles pas d'âge hein tu parles quand jsuis pas là mais quand jsuis là tu me parles pas d'âge. Ça veut rien dire l'âge à 16 ans j'aller rentrer au centre de formation de Clairefontaine mais jme suis fait les croisés, si toi a 16 ans t'es pas capable d'aligner la personnalité d'un personnage de manga dans ton œuvre c'est un soucis mais c'est pas grave continue à écrire tu peux t'améliorer force a toi bonne continuation.
OGVipex:So translation gives me “stop writing” cool but no Don’t like it? Then don’t read it, not that hard, not like I’m doing this for a specific person, I’m doing it cause I got the idea and bothered to make it, its not for everyone. Plus I’m 16, you expect some masterpiece?
So translation gives me “stop writing” cool but no Don’t like it? Then don’t read it, not that hard, not like I’m doing this for a specific person, I’m doing it cause I got the idea and bothered to make it, its not for everyone. Plus I’m 16, you expect some masterpiece?
Guren_nnn:Il a quand même tout dit là. Si même se remettre en question c'est difficile arrête d'écrire.
Having to translate that all was just a pain, but here now at the end you just say good luck I can improve Yeah thanks, great advice you’ve just given me
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I see what the review means by mistake. The very first sentence, if you can call it that, displays a multitude of errors in writing style. No punctuation, a misuse in commas, long running sentences, etc. It's quite hard to believe the author is from the USA, as their profile states. If they just moved, it makes sense.