Review Detail of Eldritch_Umbra in {{{DROPPPED}}}

This is easily my favorite story on the site. I'd come into this thinking that there'd be something to pull apart, but there actually wasn't, aside from some odd phrasing here and there. First chapter makes an attempt to pull sympathy for the MC, It's effective enough. The second chapter is a very good introduction to a new world, easily one of the best I've seen on this site. I'm genuinely surprised.